Arguments On News

Academic writing is a kind of writing that talks about reality. One of those reality is about comments and arguments on news. In my country, Indonesia, one of the "hottest" news is about new parliament building. That plan brings a lot of pro and contra from the people, but must of them are contras and critics
Here is my argument on it...

Arguments on New Parliament Building

       Last week, I read a newspaper that talks about the new Indonesian Parliament Building (DPR). A lot of contra happen to that plan. However, the fact is the old one is not necessary anymore, especially for the payload. All of the critic talks about Indonesian economy right now. The cost almost 1,9 trillion rupiahs.
      Marzuki Alie is one of the orator of this plan. On the other hand, a lot of critics attack him. Finally, he negotiated with the contractor and get 1,2 trillion. He also stated that all parties have been agreed with this specification. However, Gerindra party never feel that they agreed. All people also accused that Marzuki is the main person of this excessive dismissal. Marzuki felt guilty and finally shut up about this for some days.
      All problems have solutions to solve it. I have some suggestions on this problem. I think, we should let Marzuki be cool first then interrogate him personally about this plan. After the problems with Marzuki done, the senators should have a special meeting that talks about a new building and do a deliberation. If they didn't get a best solution for this problem, do private senators voting. Then, consult the result to the president and his subordinate, in order to get better solution. The final is do everything by that result. But, I think that better we make a special election about new building. Ok, that all my arguments about new building, I hope it will help reducing chaos and restless demonstration.

Two Truths and One Lie

I ever write three short stories together with my friends. Two of them are truths and one of them is lie. We have guessed, from all of their stories, which one is a lie. Although it is very improve our writing abilities, it was a fun game to guess which one is the lie. It can also help us to know one another.You can also enjoy this game  by guessing my story, by voting. You can vote one the right corner of my blog.
         My first story is...
         When I was a kindergarten student, I had an accident. That time, I would like to cross a street in front of my school. I ran quickly that street and a motorcycle hit me. I spun (just for around 100 degrees)and fell down. I got my knee injured but finally I was OK.

   My second story is...
       When it was a first time for my parents come to Jakarta, I suffered a bad diarrhea. That time, my parents miss their medicine box. Luckily, our house is very near with a hospital. However, my parents won't bring me to that hospital. Finally, my parents just pray and I was healed, without any medicine.

     My third story is...
       I ever be a swimming athlete in my complex. I practices hard for around 2 years in my local swimming pool. When I was strong enough to join a competition, I joined it. I got third place in a district competition. I gas happy enough, although I was not allowed to come to region competition.

Ok, that's all my story... You can just vote it using a voting widget..

Gardening

This is my second project in academic writing. After doing a news-making academic writing, now I pick theme-based academic writing. That theme is all about reality, as well as academic writing is a writing based on reality. I wrote in with a partner. We took "Benefits of Gardening" as our theme. Here is our writing.

Gardening

         Gardening can be done around the world. We can do it anytime if the climate and temperature fit the plant. Gardening means reproducing and taking care of plants. Gardening has a lot of benefits. The example is to increase plant amount. If we have more plants, our food chain will be more balanced.

        One of the benefit is to make our environment greener. By growing some plants, we can increase oxygen in the air. If oxygen increases, the temperature will decrease. It will decrease the effect of global warming as well. Plants will complete our ecosystem and make it balanced. Besides, plants can color our environment. They can color our earth by their leaves, flowers, fruits, and even stems.

       Another benefit of gardening is pumps our sweat out, especially when we plough and walk around our garden. If we sweat, we are burning our fat into energy, so it can reduce obesity and make us healthy. From gardening, we can also get some experiences and knowledge about biology. We can learn how plants grow and reproduce, naturally or by help of other organisms. 

      Gardening may give us extra money. We can sell the fruits, flowers, leaves, and stems of our plants. As long as they give benefits to other people, it must give us extra money if we sell it. The money we got can be useful for our daily life. It can also be useful for people around us that have economical problems.

     Gardening has a lot of benefits. The benefits are useful for the environment, people around us, and also the people around us. However, gardening is an easy thing to do. So, why don't we do it for our earth and descendant? If the earth is comfortable and green, it must be useful for our descendant next time.

Academic Writing

Academic writing is a kind of writing that containing facts. It connected closely with school or realities. It can be arranged from Wh-questions and opinions from people got from interviews. In my last project, I had to make a news reports about an issue about life, such as the effect of gaming, like what I wrote below. In case of this, those opinions will support the fact and issue I made.

Games Change Your Habits

        What is the first game you play? Is it an electronic game? Do you ever feel that games change your habits? I have to admit that some games is very exciting and useful, but, if it already change your habit, you have to be careful. If you feel that games are everything, more than your family and friends, it means that games already make you individualistic.
        Why can it make you individualistic? Let's open the facts. With whom do you usually play games? If you play with the others, do you compete each other? If yes, that make you individualistic. You tend to just do everything for yourself. You will think just for yourself and fight each other.
        When some ask 2 players to join, it let both of the players to kill and hit others with violence.A few months after it, you will tend more to hit some of your friends. Sometimes, your mark falls down because your lazy to study and loves to play games more. Those are sign that games have already affected and changed your habits. You have to reduce your gaming activity before you become worse in other things, especially sociality and studying process.
So, keep careful about your gaming activity. It may changes all gamers’s habits. Gaming may addict and affect your sociality and studying process. You have to reduce your gaming activity before it make you addicted.

Opinions:

Questions:
1.    Do you feel addicted with any games? Why?
2.    Do you think that games changes your habits?
3.    Do you feel more individualistic after playing a game? What game?

Mario Averdi:
1.    Yes, because it takes much time to finish the mission.
2.    No
3.    Yes, Grand Theft Auto

Caraka Canakya Putra:
1.    Yes, Call of Duty and RPG games, because it's fun to shoot people.
2.    I don’t know.
3.    No

Descriptive Writing and Sensory Details

Descriptive writing is another technique of  writing that we usually use. Descriptive writing is a kind of writing that describes something and normally without dialogs. Descriptive writing looks more official and scientific than narrative writing. Descriptive writing is often a fact, because it is used to give a report of an observation. However, not all descriptive writings contains fact. Sometimes, it can be a prediction and description about something will happen if lose our senses.

Sensory details are all details that we can catch with our senses. In an observation report, sensory details is very important. Sensory details give information to the readers about characteristics of something we observe. Sensory details usually appear in a form of non-action verbs, such as "smells", "looks", "tastes", "sounds", and "feels".

One of the descriptive story containing sensory details is "What if I am blind?" This story will contains my prediction, feeling, and everything will happen if I am blind.

Mission Impossible

I chose to write "What will happen to me if I am blind" because I thought that eyes or seeing sense is the more important than hearing sense. With eyes, we can contend deafness better than only ears without eyes. However, without ears is not good also. We can't hear expressions from other people around us. 

If I am blind, I will became a very different person than today. I enjoy playing car, train, and airplane simulators very much. Without eyes, we cant do those things. I also enjoy journey so much. I seldom sleep inside a car, an airplane, or a train; because I enjoyed looking after fields, mountains, beaches, and even traffics. For me, it looks like heaven and apple for my eyes. I really enjoyed journey. Maybe, when I grow up, my hobby is driving.

Without eyes, we can't see anything. World just looks black, solid black without any object. I can't see anything. I will get very bored without looking at all of I like. It was impossible for me to even write this blog. I will need help from other people to tell me about the beauty of nature around us. I am impossible to drive and play simulators without eyes. I need help from other people to do everything very much, and I can't become an independent person because of blindness. It is impossible to have a life without eyes for me, at least if I got blind this second.

Folk Tales

Folk tales is also an example of narrative writing. We can re-write folktales by changing the story focus. Usually, a folk tale has we (the teller) as the focus. All of characters told has "he", "she", or "they". Now, I would like to retell a Javanese folk tale called "Timun Mas" or "Gold Cucumber" or "Gold Gherkin". I focused to the Giant, so all the words "I" , "My", and "Me" means the Giant.

Gold Gherkin

I lived very long time ago, thousands years ago. I lived in a forest, near farmers' village. All of the villagers feared of me. But, I didn't know why this happen. As all villagers had to pass this forest to get into their house from field, I heard what they were saying, grumbling, sharing, and praying about. I heard the most about Mr. and Mrs. Simin's prayers about having a child. They said, "Lord, we know that You are kind and give all of what we need, but please give us a children. Just one Lord, please, please..." 

"Wow, it's a good moment to have a maid, although I have to wait for a long time:, I said hopefully. Then, I decided to reply them, "OK, I will give you a daughter." They were very surprised. "I am the giant! But, in her age of fifteen, you have to give she back for me! Deal?", I continued. They think for a moment, then replied "Hmm... OK, we deal. Thank you a lot, Giant." Not a long time after, Mrs Simin was pregnant. She gave a birth to a cute and beautiful baby daughter. They gave "Timun Mas" as a name for their daughter.

I waited for a very long time for her. I have to count day by day, week by week, month by month, year by year. But, I knew what I waited is important. I could use her as a maid or even meal!!! Ha, ha, ha, just wait, Giant. It would be a beautiful girl. Then, I said, "Ah, two weeks to go..."

"Mrs, I can't wonder that I have to give this cute daughter to the giant", Mr. Simin said. "What? I almost forgot about it. Two weeks to go, right? What must we do?", Mrs. Simin replied. When the time came, I went to their house. They said that they wanted to postpone giving her daughter for three days. What was that? I was very mad and scolded them, "OK, if you don't give Timun Mas that day, I will take you as a replacement of Timun!" Three days later, I went back to their house, but Timun was gone. She escaped from the back door. Luckily, I still saw her.


Angrily, I chased her with all of my power. Timun was very crazy. When I was near, she threw a cucumber seed. When it hit the ground, it became a lot of cucumber tree which full of ripe cucumbers. I stopped and enjoy it for a moment, ignoring Timun. Then, I realized and chased her again. After I ate and full, she hurt me by throwing a thorn to the ground. It become thorn-brushes in front of me. They really slowed and hurt me. I had to chase her with all hurts and injuries in my body.


After that, I still got attacks from Timun. After hurt, I chased Timun again. Luckily, my long legs ran faster than her short leg. Then, she threw a little bit of salt to the ground. Then, the ground changes into wide sea suddenly. I had to swim, but Timun could run. After wide sea, I ran behind a clump of dried shrimp paste or known as "terasi". It changed into a mud pond. When I passed it, I fell and absorbed by that pond. I called her back to help me, but she didn't want to help me. After that, I felt hurt and hot, then I didn't know what happened after it. (Because I was died already)

"What if..." Story

Another example of narrative story or narrative writing is "What if..." story. "What if..." story is a fiction story about what will happen if something in our world changes or disappear. Last time, I took a theme "What if plants could talk?" I answered this questions in a form of story.

Shouting Plants

      Once upon a time, some farmers were planting their crops in a field. All happened normally, until a few of months. That time, a farmer who lived near with the field heard singing song like a choir. He ignored it and thought that it was only a problem in his ears.

     A few months passed without that sound, and it was the time to harvest. The farmers harvested them as usual, but a magic happened. When the scissors, axes, and other harvesting tool cut them, they shouted very loud. They shouted, "Hey, you! Don't cut that part! It is my food restoration! Evil you!" Another one shouted "Aaaaaarrggh!!! Aaargh!!! Don't hurt me!!!" Now, they know, that the plants could speak. The farmer who heard a song few months ago be a witness about the talking plants. He heard that they sang alike human, based on their voices and expressions.

    The farmers continued harvesting until it was finished. When the plants were thrown to the box, they shouted because of hurt. And even when they were thrown to hot deck of the truck, they shouted again. That time, there was a big chaos on the field and even on road and streets, because the plants shouted because they hated being at a bumpy, hot, or cold trucks. They grumbled like a human in the jail. They said "Take me out from here! This places is very uncomfortable!"

   At markets and supermarkets, they also kept grumbling. All places containing vegetables, such as fields, trucks, streets, roads, green grocers, markets, supermarkets, restaurants, and even house's kitchens filled with that annoying noise. Even the cook, who cut the vegetables and salad lovers who ate raw vegetables, heard that noise. "My God! You put me in a hot pan? What do you want?", they shouted to cooks in a restaurant.

   When a new 'planting' season started, the farmers still planted new plants. But, that time, the plants didn't grow. They just made a lot of noise without growing. "I don't want to grow... I don't want to give anything for the evil one.", they grumbling as they didn't want to grow. It made a vegetable crisis around the world and made prices of vegetables increasing. This made an even bigger chaos than just noise. "No carrots all around the world. If you want, $ 1000 per kilograms!", they said one another.

   Some scientists searched how to stop that disgusting noise. They developed a medicine which can stop any noise from any living things except from human. Those scientists had tried to stop a cat's noise, a dog's noise, and a bird's noise. Then, that medicine distributed to all farmers around the world.

   Finally, all plants stop talking. They grew again like normal plants, before they could talk. They also as productive as normal plants. After a few months, vegetable price started to decrease. Nowadays, vegetables don't shout anymore. The world become very peaceful now. Everyone is benefited by the scientist's invention.

Chain Story

I have a narrative story that was written by 4 different authors. This story is called chain story. My story's theme is 'Mystery'. I differentiate those authors by writing in in a different font color. Here is my story. I name this story 'A Really Crazy Day' because all of the authors made a lot of crazy situations to me along this story.

A Really Crazy Day

      It was a dark and stormy night when I back home from a store. I had to pass a dark park. Suddenly, I found strong wind and it began to rain. The, I felt that it was an ice rain. I sat on a roofed bench to protect me from the rocky ice. When I sat there, a huge hail hit me in head.

      I woke up in a simple wooden house. A man came out from a room and treated my head. I found out I wasn’t at my neighborhood anymore. I was in a middle-aged village. People use farmer’s clothing and bring their farming tools with them. They work during a hard and stormy night, don’t care about what’s happening. As I walked, the road started to vanish. I realized that I fell from the sky. The village was in the sky!

     Thousands of people were staring at me. I was at my regular café. I walked through the alleyway. I saw a beautiful girl. That girl asked me to come to her. But, she ran. I tried to catch her. But, she’s like a Woman Flash. She ran like a crazy wolf. Suddenly, I lost her.

     “Amen”, I said in my heart but suddenly “Aaaaaaa..!!!!!”, a woman screamed with crazy face looking at me. I jumped and surprised, the I ran to my house. Then, I saw blood in my room. It was my cousin bleeding because he was stabled by a knife. Then my father came in and said, “Yosafat, My money was gone, did you stole it?” Yosafat said, “No”. Father said “You liar”. Yosafat screamed but his cousin and father laughed and said “April Fool”